Slackman's Reviews

[Alive (NATA Finals)]

This was really great man! I liked the philosophical take you took on the concept. It was definitely a fascinating take on the topic.

Points for going for FBF. It may not have been the cleanest way to animate, but it made your characters lively and interesting to watch.

The audio was kinda crappy, and some of the coloring looked a little dull - but this is just nitpicking.

You should be proud man! Good luck!

[Transit]

Beautifully done man, you should be proud! It's an excellent take on the topic and everything looks really polished. Your use of colors truly shines. Good luck!

Emrox responds:

Thanks, man! And also thanks for being a part of the whole NATA experience, 'cause this was definitely the best year yet.

[Youxi Demo]

Demos shouldn't be here

If you're actually looking for advice on this, your best bet would be to post it to your dumping grounds and put the link up in the animator's forum. You'll got some decent advice there. Posting something as short as this in the portal is just asking for a bunch of reviews complaining about its length or the fact that it's stick figures.

That being said, there's not much to review here. Everything looks fine. It looks like you've got the basic concepts down. You just need to set your sights a little higher and make something a little more ambitious. I looks fine for clip that's less than 10 seconds.